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A repost. What do you think?

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I posted this earlier, but it was during a coffee break/error, so only one person answered it. Here it is again.

Poet, Dreaming

Welcome, o my brethren

To this Utopian land.

Where ideas grow on trees,

An a pen is always in hand.

You shall write to your content;

No fear of writer's block.

You won't find any trolls here,

Living only to mock.

No, here you find just poets,

Or critics here and there.

They always have time for you,

With advice forever to spare.

So welcome dreamers, poets, friends

To this magical world of mine.

You may come and go as you please:

But come back any time.

I've heard of trolls from others, and was really bored. I seriously just wrote this straight onto here. I hate the title, so I'm gonna need a new one probably.

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  1. WOW

    that's pretty good, very poetic,

    but i could never think of that

    Very creative   :>


  2. I like it! There is a website where I THINK you can post poems:

    http://www.postpoems.com/newmember/

    Hope I helped! :]

    ♥Loey♥

  3. This land need not be just a dream,

    I'll whisper a small truth,

    there is a haunt where poets live

    away from trolls uncouth.

    Where words float freely with no hate,

    a home among the stars,

    look closely, you will find your way

    to join the poets of Mars.

  4. i had my comment their, check it.

  5. i like it..maybe the title should be "welcome"  best i can come up with.

  6. i like it!

  7. Land of Poetry might be a nice title

  8. I think it's beautiful.

    You must be really poetic.

    That is a talent I've always wished I had.

  9. Really to tell the truth. Don't quite your day job.

  10. it starts out really strong but I feel like you fade as you go along.  revise it a bit and it could be very cool!

  11. "Where ideas grow on trees"

    I absolutely adore that line.

    It's perfect.

  12. Nice.

    This has to be one of the best poems that I have read that was posted onto this forum.

    Good work.

    Perhaps,

    "Birds of a Feather"

    as your title.

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