A reposted poem due to small response. Any comments?

Question

The sound of dancing windchimes

tells me there’s good sleeping in store;

delta breezes float

through windows and doors

as they will my dreams tonight.

Coolness moves through the valley

pushing out all the heavy clouds

of yesterday’s disasters,

as if the breath of God had

come to restore the stars in the night sky

and hang the moon back in place.

Answer 1

I like it its relaxing :)

Answer 2

i like it alot. well done and keep writing. =]

Answer 3

as they will my dreams tonight!!!!

very good  I like it

Keep writing!!!!!

Answer 4

it's really calming and refreshing. it flows nicely too. well done.

Answer 5

I love the sounds of windchimes

and how they chime while dancing

in the wind.

windchimes can be indoors or outdoors

If the windchimes are indoors the breezes goes

through the door and window.

Make sure the wind is not too strong

or they can blow off.

Answer 6

Did you write it?  I found it at this website  http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/fresh-air...

Written by a poet named Carol Brunelle in 1946

If you just want comments on her work?  I don't care for windchimes so they don't help me sleep.  But the poem is good.

Very nice to meet you then.  You have to understand this day and age with people stealing artists work why I asked.

Your work is very descriptive.....very nice

I do really like Ancient Struggle

Since I have a 16 year old daughter

Answer 7

I could say stop plagerizing yourself...that was hilarious (just a funny coincidence nothing against smiley).

The last three lines have some beautiful phrasing. Very evocative.

Answer 8

It reminds me of the song Summer Breeze and sound like peace was restored.

Answer 9

That is so beautiful. I love 'dancing windchimes.' Beautiful.