A romantic poem, how is it?

Question

Each time I try to reveal my feelings,

my lips remain secretive.

My heart longs for you desperately,

body incessantly craving for your touch.

As I lie and dream about you,

I see you holding my waist; bringing me closer.

Me sensing your breath on my neck.

Feeling your skin against mine.

Embracing the affection in your kiss.

And so experiencing the intimacy of our love.

My last wish, to be in this sweet love the same way,

we getting closer and closer with each passing day.

Answer 1

When one is in love and is not getting response, he starts speaking and what he speaks, that is poetry and it is poetry full of romance.

Answer 2

Lol! Great poem! I can feel the love in it! Wonderful! Carry on the great work ok? and do post your poems here..

Answer 3

I gave the gift ,                                                                                 of boy hood innocence to her,

she took it ,with carnal lust,

in her warm -tense-expanse of flesh..

Answer 4

This is a great one...

I will pass it to my girl friend...

Regards,

Rajesh

http://rajeshmohandas.blogspot.com/

Answer 5

you had put in words what most lovers feel. great job Zuhi. I too write romantic poems but i donot write in English. But i always stop myself from expressing my feelings openly.

Answer 6

Zuhi its realy ramantic ahd I like it very much

Answer 7

Great poem!