A second sonnet from Lulleh Rhymesmith. What do you think?

Question

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Sonnet II

His eyes were h**l, his gaze their fiery blade

That stabbed a living soul, and burned its heart

For his own heart, dark under Satan’s shade

Had long forgotten its innocent start

Vengeful devil, summit of all evil

The rueful sky heard your summon to war

Your will destroyed, your malice did revel

On mounds of gold that hid the morning star

You were unwary of god’s wrathful eye

Whose will did blast the clouds and split the ground

And then your bane was thundered from the sky

Oh! Forgive us lord! What a furious sound!

And where, once a tyrannous crown did gleam

Naught remained, save a memory too dim

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Answer 1

This is much different than you usually write! What I mean by that is the topic!  Usually you write about nature! This is written well , although not my favorite topic, but yes seem to have your usual flow and style that is pleasant in your poetry!  Cheers!!