A seplotet (yes I got the idea from Evadne Terra). Do you like it?

Question

I really don't care it you hate it. I just wanted to try one out. It is kind of weird and I don't think I like it. I don't know, make of it what you will. Oh, and this has never happened to me, don't worry.

Submission

I leave

the door

open for

you.

You break it

down

and beat

me.

If you hate it, that's fine.

Answer 1

Hey, no, I don't mind your asking, and I definitely don't hate this. The only thing that is wrong with the form is that it's only supposed to be seven lines. Try a rewrite like this.

I leave

the door

open

for you.

You break it

down

and beat me.

Septolets are only supposed to be seven lines down, but you got the word count perfect. Also, the subject matter is chilling and cuts close to the heart of some people. Picture perfect title as well. Great job.