A sub-poem ? ?

Question

i woke up with a spark in my hand

after entering that state of mind

black phantoms swooped through the lines

an army far more superior than any other

with a great number of units.

i destroyed one

and i destroyed them all

moving fast

taking the lives of the animated

trying to free my mind

so that i escape this foretelling misery

because death is just breathing

i call it a sub-poem because its not one of my serious works. just something i need to get out of my head :)

this poem is literally about me fighting zombies in a labyrinth inside a black void :D

Answer 1

Usually, when somebody new posts something this good, I suspect hanky-panky. Please, share more with us. TD

Answer 2

There is much more there than just zombies...excellent work.

Answer 3

If this is not one of your best, please join us here and post more. We are always eager to read good new poets.