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A very short poem opinions please...?

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Is there a soul?

If so, what is a soul?

Can you please tell me

Where can I find one?

Because it sounds such a wonderful thing

I'm trying to find mine every day

I read somewhere that it doesn't exist

It's imaginary just like god

Is it mu fault?

Is it the people?

Is it the town?

I really don't know

In this world

I'm still searching for my soul

If I ever find it

You will be the first to know

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  1. Soulless

    by Tori

    ((c) 0807.14)

    You are born with a soul,

    bonded with your body.

    How could you lose it?

    You cannot, but you can

    deceive yourself that it

    is gone because you

    are too good for others.

    Do you want your soul back?

    Then step off your pedestal

    and bend down to help the

    needy, reach out to offer warmth

    to one who is cold, give yourself

    and find your soul.

    T.


  2. i like it very much. 8D your good at poetry

  3. Multiple thoughts .. and feelings.. and U R concerned of others to let them know of the good things.

    and it is imaginary that is perceived conceptually .. for it is one of God's greatest work.. the essence of life.

    U haven't lost balance of the flow .. control upon words .. Ur own beliefs R hidden .. nice work..!!

  4. With a moniker

    like yours,

    a soul will be

    a hard thing to find.

    A soul,

    reaches out,

    uncondescending,

    and becomes

    empathy,

    not

    derision.

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