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ABC kind of love...what do you think?

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Always and Forever

Because I love you

Can we really believe

Death will be our dues?

Eternity is a long time

For two hearts to last

Good times, will come and go

How will we ever get past,

If we look at it mathmatically

Just hang it up, now

Knowing the numbers are slim

Life gets in the way, somehow

Many others have tried

Not many have passed

Only the determined few

Put forever on their tabs

Quickly time will pass

Real love wil be put to the test

Surely two hearts Like ours

Two souls that, know it's best

Unite with one another

Vowing now with our everything

Waiting to prove them wrong

eXcited about what it will bring

Young and innocent

Zealous and free

we will reach our forever

and see eternity

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  1. amazing, you are truely talented! I love it!


  2. It's very good... to me, it seems sort of rebellious towards any doubt which might get in the way of love.

    I like that.

  3. ''Life gets in the way, somehow''

    Best line in the piece,seems to me.

    Good. Wish you get published!

  4. Another amazing poem by laura b !!!! Cheers !!!

  5. Read "fragile fairy" in "Strengthen Thy Soul". The answer lies there.

    http://frogbooks.net

    http://amazon.com

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