Acrostic Poem ; Care to comment?

Question

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Shelter of your arms

Silently you appeared

Holding my life in your hands

Encouraging me near

Listening to my soul demands

Taking my pain and setting me free

Each moment I now live for you

Resting on your surety

Overcoming becomes my destiny

From now on, I hope to be

Yours forever more

Once saved, I now can live

Under your wings, which i adore

Raging storms, will cause alarm

And many, won’t be found

Resting in your grace and mercy

My peace abiding, in the;

Shelter of your arms

Answer 1

Hi!"

Very creative, I liked it alot. great job.  : )

Answer 2

This has a singular purity of melodrama. I like that, it's refreshing.

Answer 3

its good

Answer 4

Very good, and a lovely expression of "His" compassion

and Grace. Kudos.

Answer 5

aww it's really nice!!

Answer 6

thats very pretty. I like it a lot. It can mean a few different things to me, i like that.

Answer 7

very beautiful!

Answer 8

You have expressed your faith well, something like the way David wrote his psalms. (Again, 2 suggestions: L3 soul = soul's, L12 i = I). A pleasure to read.

Answer 9

I love it....

did you mean "Listening to my soul demands taking my pain and setting me free" or did you mean "Listening to my soul's demands, taking my pain and setting me free"?

Answer 10

Sorry, but I don't like it

Answer 11

I especially like L.5.  A very religious poem, using classical imagery .Nicely done!