Acting Cover letter help!!

Question

........................................... Lauren Sandwich

......................................... 262 XXXXX Road

......................................... Somewhere, GA XXXXX

......................................... (x*x) x*x-XXXX

......................................... [e-mail]

Dear Ms. Beverly,

I am interested in film, television, and commercial representation through your agency.

Recently I have been involved in a community production of The Music Man as Zaneeta Shinn and intensive on camera classes instructed by Michael McLendon at Epiphani, Inc.

Enclosed are my comp card and resume. I hope that we will be in touch in the near future. Thank you for your time.

Sincerely,

(Signature)

Lauren Sandwich

I saw on one template to put my contact at the top, but I didn't know if that would keep them from reading the letter. Any suggestions are greatly appreciated (If you think it's awful, I want to know!)

Answer 1

Its a nice letter and shows that you can be a mature woman and see the business aspect of performance. This will definitely get their attention.  

Answer 2

I thought it was good Lauren! You kept it brief and well done. Most people don't even write a cover letter so that's is good. I usually write more to my answers, but what I said is what I meant. Good Luck!

Answer 3

oh i see msg me so you can tell me whats wrong whit mine ok?

Answer 4

I think it's a really good cover letter! You wrote why you were submitting, some past projects, an invitation to contact you, and a respectful thank you!

    I think the contact at the top is good so they see right away that they will be able to contact you.

In every template I saw, the contact info was on top. That's the way I do my cover letters!

Good Luck

Hope you get represented!

<3 Kari Mackenzie

[[woooooo go 15 year old actresses!]]

Answer 5

I know that you think the template is the right way to go, but why play on the safe side?

I mean if they've seen so many of the same thing maybe they would be even more impressed if you tried something different. It would make you stand out more and they would know you were creative.