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Advice, and Criticism on poem?

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Advice, and Criticism on poem? What does it mean to you?

It Is called Dead Letter Child Hood

Have not seen you

In awhile

Lets not make a scene

Smile

You can lean on

In style

We will have fun

Fight of wolverines

Go in time machines

Things will get better

I will be with you

Never grow up

Promise me that

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  1. I like it, its a bit confusing but i really like it it get a 6.5


  2. Grammar: "Childhood", not seperated, "fight off"

    I don't understand the verse "You can lean on

    In style"  Otherwise I really like the concept, maybe a few additional stanzas would make it more comprehensible.  Keep working on it! ^_^

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