Advice on poem, any way to make it better?

Question

There eveywhere,

In my bed,

In my hair

With despair, I Shower

It scares me, this hour

Fear, Drugs of the mind

Bugs, binded with body

There everywhere, in my hair

Don’t know no where from

With despair I shower, bare

Aware of the situation

Now sweating

I relize it all was a dream

This time

Answer 1

What a coincidence. So you woke up at The Betty Ford Clinic with Nick Nolte and Robert Downey Jr after a Hollywood party too huh? My advice to you is No more tequila chasers with Sammy Hagar