Again, again, I will say it again, and maybe this time I will catch some fish?

Question

These vile letters make

miscreant words but laughter

leaps from a kindled light, sorrow

swallows itself in a parched

and creased lip that lies skinned

in it’s flesh. Eager

hunters

shape meat

in a dingy,

fishing

for attention’s gasp

and never

will it come.

Answer 1

There once was a man from Peru

who fell asleep in his canoe.

While dreaming of Venus

his played with his p***s

and awoke with a canoe full of goo.

Answer 2

Could you repeat that?

Because it's well worth repeating.

Never mind, I'll read it again.

Okay, I read it again. Nice one.

Fishing is all about waiting. It will come, but if not, try another pond.

Answer 3

I JUST SHARTED!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 4

You are brilliant. Fishing and words as metaphors; I can't commend you enough for this poem.

Answer 5

Just when you thought it was safe to go into the water.

  Hark Hark Hark  What`s that I hear  The ticking of a clock,  Not just any clock, It`s coming from the water.

Excellent way with words about the fish, one is dying to know more after

and never

will it come

not chatting   weighing up the pros and cons.

Answer 6

Heee, heeee quite nice. Let's catch those fish and have a fish fry though. Ummmmm, just love fresh caught fish over an open flame. LOL

Answer 7

Don't be carvin up no fish in a danged dingy or ya'll just end up on the lake bottom.A great day of fishin'.

Answer 8

Fishers of men somehow comes to mind here,,I have no idea why.Take me fishing too,I can even bait and gut.

Answer 9

I'm going to keep casting my line and keep the bait pail filled.

Answer 10

I think there's enough fish out there for each of us

Answer 11

what?

Answer 12

Not sure why you wrote this poem,

It appears that you are wishing,

that someone will see,

that your words eagerly,

are referring to more than "fishing."

If it is attention and response you seek,

than you have one on the "hook" I must say,

But now it looks, like it was one of the faulty hooks,

and I am "the one that got away!" *smile*

Have a great day!

Answer 13

You've caught a fish... A googly eyed, kilted black man fish of love!

Answer 14

Do you write poetry while you are fishing?  

Answer 15

Beautiful.. I am a sucker for good poems. Are you the author?

LACD.. you are very good too!

MOG.. you are so tickling good!

and ma.. yours is so true... sigh!

Answer 16

Just kill it and grill it already!

sheesh

And try no tot burn your boat.

again.

Answer 17

Nay, it has come for you.

But so true for those of us

less talented

who futilely shape meat.

ma

Answer 18

I think you're gonna need a bigger boat!