Alas! My small collection of poetry grows a few poems larger...?

Question

http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?book_ID=628

...So would you mind commenting/critiquing it? I've been lucky enough to generate a few fans here on Yahoo, so I'd really love to hear some feedback on my latest poems! Thank you in advance!

Answer 1

I started reading your book about Jane and her search for romance. Reading Chapter 2 is when I realized, that I'm not into romantic novels, or short stories. (lol)

I am not trying to be mean or anything, I just can't get into the plot of any romantic novel. I guess that because of my male ego. Sorry, it gets in the way sometimes.

Had the story been more adventurous, with more accomplishments than just romantic ones I would have continued to read your book. Every thing else about it was captivating and written like a writer who knows what she is doing. The adjective usage was stupendous. I enjoyed reading the meeting of father and daughter. I found the lingo quite chuckle jerking, and the phrasing as easy reading.

I also took time to read that last poem posting of yours, about miracles, and I couldn't agree with it more.

Keep up the great work, for as you point out, for things to happen (miracles) it takes a lot of effort.

I think I may start an account with worthy of publishing, and see where it takes me.

Thanks for posting.

Pelagai?? Zee. I have never head this name (Pe-la-gai?) before. How does one pronounce it, or do you have a nick-name?