All POETS, Bring your Best :D?

Question

What happens is that you write a peice of poetry in a standard 8 line spiel. The most imaginative or well written one will get 10 points; heres my example

Mystical dreams

Floating around me

Fairies & vines

Of a hollow tree

Running and skipping

Through my imagination

Mystical dreams

Betray my hallucination

Have Fun!!!

Answer 1

Light fades

Shadows all fall

Slowly sinking

The water becomes me

Pressure amounts

The body feels numb

The light appears

The mind awakes.

Answer 2

How imaginative this be

This task you have assigned

I thank you for inviting me

You are so very kind

Should you like to hear my verse?

Then I shall wrack my brain

But there be no time for rehearse

You'll have to try again

Answer 3

Eight standard lines

The usual spiel

Imagine and write

Get 10 points as

Well and you might

Wow the fans

Take your bow

Slings or Arro-

Answer 4

I would love to reply here with a shorter work of mine but none of my poems are eight lines long. If you'll expand your rule to ten or less I'll post a ten-liner I've written that I'm proud of.

EDIT: You didn't say yes so I'll post this one eight-liner I've written:

Keeping Score

Some play it for amusement

and seek adventure only.

Some play it for revenge and

some play because they’re lonely.

Some play to just play along

and they play the game badly.

But most play the game too long

and end the game too sadly.