All is Well; Care to Comment?

Question

Why did I cry when I saw a fish dead

Being rocked gently by an unseen hand?

What shadow lies at the back of my mind

Mocking my existence, but still calls me friend?

Concentrating all dreams and ambitions

To the reality of life without God

Farewell my friend you lived your life well, I hope

We can now share this moment together

No time to discuss the perils of h**l

I cry for all who say, “it is well”

It’s not well,

Its not well for a “society”

That claims equality, with God

While “Christians” stand by prepared to watch

a world fade out of all existence

It’s not well!

Its not well for you

If you refuse to review,

Why,

Where,

Here

How can it be well?

When were left facing

The prospect of h**l

and God says

“Choose”

Answer 1

First, I'm so happy that you're back on the board. I missed your poetry.

One of the first commandments was "choose life." This was said to the people of the Old Testament. The world is made of many religions, all of us must work together.. No matter our faith or backgrounds, we must respect and love one another.

All is "not well," and it will never be until we let God decide and stop this disrespect for people who are "different." This is our only home.

Answer 2

Touches the soul.

Answer 3

Wow, that was a good poem! Needs to be put to music. Something with a soothing beat, maybe? Keep writing. ♥ ∞  

Answer 4

Bravo! I love poems that make us question, think. After all isn't that what life is about, questioning and the chase for the answers. This is very good and made me think, thanx

Answer 5

Good to go with me!

Answer 6

Very well written.  As if rocked gently by unseen hands.

Answer 7

Wow! That was intense, so true.

Answer 8

Thumbs up ! Semper Fi Reborn ...................& 2 the poem!