All you guys please help me to improve this poem. What do you think of it?

Question

Slump

The insomnia is chilling

I am like a drink

That is cool

Not quenching

I like so diving

In waters raining from storm

Trusting centrepidal whirlpools

Sucking me under soul

I find love

Like poison cynide

It adorns

With the wisdoms granite

That the mind is frilled

With dendrite

On the cover of a magazine

Cool chic and cosmopolitan

I feel voracious

What of such forages

Cups of slush

Would you ask if I touch

I occasionally cuddle

In arms in chicks in love

My sin like treacle kisses

Weed me out

Of this sour pickle secret

Slump

Dripping I crawl out of the water

In a twillight I am in her

In duration

Softly we inhale the slip

Of mind

Answer 1

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Answer 2

heres how i would rewrite it.. just some slight changes

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Slump

This insomnia is chilling

I am like a drink

That is cool

Not quenching

I dream of diving

In waters raining from storm

Trusting centrepidal whirlpools

Sucking my soul under

I find love

Like poison cynide

It adorns

With the wisdoms granite

That my mind is frilled

With dendrite

On the cover of a magazine

Cool chic and cosmopolitan

I feel voracious

What of such forages

Cups of slush

Would you question my touch

I occasionally cuddle

In arms in chicks in love

My sin like treacle kisses

Weed me out

Of this sour pickle secret

Slump

Dripping I crawl out of the water

twillight I am in her

In duration

Softly we inhale the slip

Of minds (or my mind)

also, consider changing the title to show what is actually being talked about