Am I any good at writing short stories?

Question

I wrote this story, and I'm thinking about writing more, but, that's only if I'm actually good at it... so please take a look and tell me what you think!

http://abriannapeto.deviantart.com/art/Out-of-Body-Experience-84716189

Answer 1

'out of body  experience' is quite good. There is excellent creative imagination.