An Early Morning Conversation about Last Night?

Question

An Early Morning Conversation about Last Night

“I feel as if I’m broken and I don’t know what to do

And my feelings . . . my feelings ain’t that well.

Wish I could give them to you.”

“I feel as if I’ve spoken and I don’t know what I said.

And MY feelings . . . my feelings ain’t that well.

Wish I could get that in your head.”

“Remember?”

“No, no I don’t.”

“Remember!”

“I think I won’t”

“Remember!?”

“I wish I could.”

“Remember?!”

“You think I should”

“Well, yes I do, that’s why I said it to you.”

“What’s that?”

“REMEMBER!?!?”

“NO . . . well . . . , well yes I do”

“I do what?”

(Spell checker just told me to change "spoken" to via and "that" to Ian. That chick is more srewed up than the schizoid.)

Answer 1

I like it very much.....especially the first one.

“I feel as if I’m broken and I don’t know what to do

And my feelings . . . my feelings ain’t that well.

Wish I could give them to you.”

and the arguments provide good times for reading. do you practice writing one act plays? I find it something very interesting these days to involove myself in...giving life to new characters and making them speak from their hearts...making them live and never return back from our stages.  

Answer 2

Funny and all so true.  My wife remembers every nuanced word from a year ago, I have trouble with a conversation from a day ago!  

Answer 3

CAUTION! (Yes, blast it...it left the caps lock key on.)

Do Not, under any circumstances, read this prior to having at least three cups of coffee.  It might be dangerous to your morning brain!

Answer 4

Women do remember everything...but don't ask me why or how.

Very interesting poem, written with humor, about our different memory pathways!

Answer 5

I like the poem.

Answer 6

cool!!!

Answer 7

Yup, my man...It only takes ONE to tango.

Answer 8

What's screwed up about changing any word to 'Ian'? It's MY favourite word.

Women remember everything? They never remember to put that toilet seat back up again. Or where they left their purse after agreeing to go dutch.

Nice light amusing piece.

And there's that ol' thumbs down again. "Infamy, infamy, they've all got it......."     Yeah, you got it.

Me and spell checker the same person? And why not? I've been accused of being just about everyone else!

Answer 9

I have had dialogue AND monologue like this.

Tea helps.

Answer 10

I understand perfectly...I too have mistakenly posted things in the wrong section.