An introduction that grabs attention For Teenagers having Babies?

Question

I am needing so help to get the readers attition on this paper can you please help me asap.

Answer 1

what do you mean "Teenagers having babies", you want to get the attention from teenagers who are pregnant?

what really is the purpose of your paper, i cant tell you without knowing, everything you write is supposed to have a purpose or else it is c**p writing and i dont even know your audience.

Answer 2

How about a statistic?

Like "90% of teenagers who have babies will not get a college education".

or something.

Answer 3

Something lke a pregnant teen will most likely not get a single date for the next 9 months or like abercrombi doent make maternity clothes... or some really sad story!answer mine http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

Answer 4

Qhat direction does your paper take, pos or neg? Who is it addressed to, teens or adults of teens or the general public.

What is the topic... It is important to included to topic in your introduction as well as list some of the topic you are discussing within your paper. the format should be;

1sentence - re word your topic with your view in mind

2sentence - the point you make in your first para

3sentence - the point you make in your second pare

and so on

the last sentence should bring the topic and your point of view on it back into the readers mind.

another thing is the introduction should never have quotes or facts in them save that for the para in which you discuss the relivent data.

Give me the topic and your view on it and i can help you more.

Answer 5

the most demanding boss?

help wanted! horrible hours and low pay. demanding boss.

Answer 6

Looking forward to stretch marks and sleepless nights?