I'm not sure that this is the final form of this poem but I'm interested in your opinion.
I feel that I lost
something important.
My life?
No, who's interested in it?
My love?
No, it's born dead in me.
My hope,
that seems to be out
like glowing embers under ash?
My faith,
that wasn't ever real?
My God,
whom I never trusted?
My fate
that I didn't follow?
My destiny
that I've smacked?
Please, help me, who read these lines.
What have I done wrong?
What's that I've lost?
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