Angel sketch? how can i improve?

Question

can anybody tell me ways to improve this please

link -- -- http://mascalex.deviantart.com/art/angel-96330436

Answer 1

Make the right arm match the left. Add more contrast, by using a charcoal or just increasing the contrast and change the lighting. Add more shading to make her skin less of a sketch nd more of a finished, shaded work

Answer 2

I would move the light to have it coming from above, and keep it soft.,  it seems to get too bright at the bottom of the sketch.

  The arms look different,   I think because the angle from where she is sitting they would look that way, one you are looking at more full on, and the other from the side, so I don't think I would change that.

  I would put some type of graceful drape on her, rather than nude.

The wings are beautiful.

Answer 3

that's really good! maybe make her right arm a bit thicker...it seems thinner than the left one, and also maybe have her hair hang down more since her head's down. You did the shading very nicely and I love her wings! hope I helped =)

Answer 4

ummm would be good if it was ur drawing...