Anger Released poets what do you think of this?

Question

I didn't spend much time on this about 3 minutes, I want to know if this works if your upset about something, or inspired and helpful comments apprectated !!

Anger Released

Gnarly knots and tangled hair

Nails need to be trimmed

Hardly any hair skin burned and razor

cuts into the skin and reddish scarred

Must have been muzzled and held up high

tethered and frightened wish I knew why

What can I do what can i say

that can ever make this image go away

Angry upset ready to kill

wont change a thing

Never again will you have to face

this kind of treatment from any place

Answer 1

Red avenger has come to my cryin stone... took the tears away and faded into my heart... turnin it  into  cold storm...

Good Luck.

Answer 2

I love it. Bloody brilliant! So evocative and the imagery? Wow! Wonderful work...thank you for sharing!

Answer 3

Was it one of those things where each line just sort of popped up in your head after you wrote down a line? And I like it! Very raw and animalistic. Evokes a sense of betrayal and confinement, and at the end release. I'd love to know the context.

Answer 4

I like reading what you have written. How long have you been writing poetry?