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Stone:

Pain overcomes shock,

Cutting to the bone,

This, the deepest wound,

I have ever known,

I took a chance,

Let her inside,

Sunk in her roots,

Ripped up my life,

Heart now is stone,

Veins flow with ice,

No thought of remorse,

As I end her life.

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This is bloody fantastic! You have a rare talent. Oh my, this is just so evocative!