Another Poem, Seeking Opinions?

Question

When gods collide

There's no winning side

Just fools praying

To the never-ending lies

Hypnotized by their empy promises

Accepting them as truths

How could two societys

Relize they've been duped

Suicide bombings

In the name of God

Watching the children

As they fall

Thoughtless puppet of the gods

Believeing their every word

Such is the folly of man

To follow what is not

The holy crusades

Their leader divine

They forget us

Who do not align

Athiesm such a sinful thought

Lest you become Agnostic

Tolerance a failed concept

When religion leads to death

It dawned upon me

My prophecies need fulfillment

Slay the breeders of the plague

Which infects the minds of peasants

I creep into the sacred halls

Seeking a god

Repentance he asks

Death he recieves

Slaying him for man's Destiny

Braindead leaders

Attempt to coverup

The lies and deciets

The walls fall around them

They are unclean

Toxins in the minds

Of the people have been cleansed

Free to think

Free to sin

Free to live their lives again

Freedom of Man

To rule the land

Without obeying

Gods Demands

Answer 1

The first answerer talked about not liking this because she liked lovely things....

well this is very lovely.

Nice work. It amazes me what talent some people have to create. If I could give you a high five, lol, I would.

Answer 2

I can see you have put a lot of work into this poem, but it is not my cup of tea. I like lovely things and words. I am sure

it is very good tho.

Answer 3

I love it, quite a poem! You put what i think on paper in such a beautiful way!

I hope this is the antidote for some readers, get rid of the poison that is religion!

Answer 4

Hey!

Wow. Your poetry, it really strikes.

I wish I could be more descriptive, but take it as a compliment that I can't. The moments of wonder and realization in life can never truly be described with words. I mean that, I mean it's true that this is the internet, but well I know I mean it. I have a myspace, but I haven't been on in ages, I'm on facebook though? Do you have an email address?