Another cute poem for a special friend..rate it..pls?

Question

I see you there heart startly flare

I see you clear head sweating fallen down to chair,

I see your eyes it shining blue and I think its a snare

love to watch every time you are there

admirable one here he comes

wearing dark suit is all

he got

but something on it

he can resist so I ask

how can i be one of it..

-abby-

Answer 1

i don't like ti too cliche, may be good for a school assignment

Answer 2

scale from 1-10 about a 9.. I really like it!!!! Keep them comming

Answer 3

well if it comes from the heart ill give it a 10

Answer 4

its nice-from the heart- really like rhyme scheme! 10

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