Another little song....?

Question

I hope you all like this. It's a second song attempt. Don't be too harsh, but give your thoughts...

THE HALO OVER MY HEAD

I woke up and called you just to confess

My secret life that I’ve hidden

I have to confess every little dirty secret

And now you leaving me

Life a tragedy

The halo over my head is breaking with regret

I call you, you can hear me, our destiny is set

The halo over my head is breaking down

Into tears

I can’t call you now

You’re out of my mind

Just as things were looking up for you

They dropped down for me

Look at what you see

The halo over my head is breaking with regret

I call you, you can hear me, our destiny is set

The halo over my head is breaking down

Into tears

You could call me a lover

Or you could call me a foe

And you can call me a dreamer

Oh I don’t know, I don’t know

The halo over my head is breaking with regret

I call you, you can hear me, our destiny is set

The halo over my head is breaking down

Into tears

The halo over my head is breaking with regret

The halo over my head is breaking down

Answer 1

omg is tht a real song or one you have just made up because it saounds really really good

Answer 2

I was wondering if you would send me a few of your songs and I can fix them up for you. And have a professional record them. Im a professional record producer in San Diego and I know some big name people that are always looking for new songs and don't want to write their own. If you are interested email me about 5 or 6 of your best songs and if they are good enough I might just invite you to L.A. to record one!