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Another one I wrote...?

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I Need You

I need you like pepper needs salt.

I just can't help it; it's not my fault.

I need you like a penny needs a wishing well.

I just can't help it; can't you tell?!

I need you like a child needs their mother.

I just can't help it; I need you, not another.

I need you like a man needs a pet.

I just can't help it; it's you I can't forget.

I need you like a person needs a friend.

I just can't help it; I'll love you til the end.

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  1. I need you like Ben Affleck needs acting school

    He was terrible in that film

    I need you like Cuba Gooding needed a bigger part

    He’s way better than Ben Affleck

    And now all I can think about is your smile

    and that S****y movie too

    Pearl Harbor sucked and I miss you


  2. I'm to lazy to sugar coat right now so here it is: The first four lines sound forced, cliched and uninspired as does the pet thing. I like the idea but I can't exactly who you are talking to, some of the lines sound like you're speaking to the love of your life while others sound like your talking to your, sister/bff. And "I'll love you til the end" is another cliche but it's just where meny peoples minds go so don't feel wierd about it. Well that was my opinion hope I helped

    ~This random person~

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