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Another poem, can you rate it?

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I'm Sorry

i told you that i hated you,

and how could you treat me like that,

i told you to leave,

you never came back.

never called,

never wrote,

you weren't even home,

so i sat in my room, clutching the phone.

thought you had forgotten me,

left me in L.A,

to find another girl,

and to keep me in shame.

then i got a call.

they said they found you in a hotel,

with a note on the door,

and when they went inside the room,

they found you on the floor.

they said you had slit your wrists,

then they said you were dead,

i hung up the phone then collasped,

i couldn't get this through my head.

they called back the next day,

and said they forgot to tell me,

that the note on the door was left for me,

and it said

I'M SORRY.

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  1. wow its pretty good


  2. Very good

  3. WOW!!! I honestly know of something like this happening about a month ago and he cut his wrist and hung his self and video taped it all because of a female!! Crazy love has so much control!! Well I like it!!!

  4. Wow i really like it.  Im embarassed to say the last line gave me a slight chill, but ill admit it.  It had a great flow to it.

  5. This is really good. It's very real.

  6. I like it!!!

  7. i got chills as i read this

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