Another poem I wrote care to comment?

Question

Dawns' light

Gazing up at the heavenly glow,

I watch the sky unfold with stories

untold.The darkness of night fades

into gold, a breath taking view for

all to behold. The world above me

awakens to a beautiful new day,

all the pain in my soul becomes a

vapor in the morn.A new spark

kindles in my troubled heart,

as a new day to begin once again,

starts.

Copyright ©2008 Charlotte McFarland

Answer 1

This is not bad, with its climbing rhyme and all.

Answer 2

A new day and a new start, yes a very positive up lifting poem, nice job!! Cheers!!

Answer 3

Gazing up at the heavenly glow,

I watch the sky unfold with stories untold.

darkness of the night fades into gold

a breath for all to  behold.

The world above me awakens to a beautiful(maybe something besides beautiful) new day,

but the poem is very goodXD

Answer 4

i think its pretty awesome

Answer 5

i love it

Answer 6

I like it my type of poem