Another poem - It's short! What do you think?

Question

Truth about Getting Older

They say it gets better when you grow older,

They say you can finally think for yourself.

They say you have power, and strength, and commitment.

But they never told you how to use it.

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Thanks for reading! What do you think?

Answer 1

It's wonderful. It seems like the world has stopped and makes you think for a little bit.

Answer 2

What do you think of this...

They say it gets better as you grow older,

They say you can finally think for yourself,

They say you have power, strength, and commitment,

Yet, it does not define your wealth.

Just a suggestion. Thanks for the inspiration...

Much love always,

Temari

Answer 3

Ehhh... It's okay, keep working at it.

Answer 4

i like this poem a lot! did u write it? or not? it's very interesting, and very creative.

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cool!!!!!!!!!

luv it!!