Another poem. Please comment it.?

Question

I love your smiles.

I love your hugs.

I love your sense of humor.

I love the way your there for me,

whenever things get tough.

I love your unconditional love.

I love when you tell me goodnight.

I love that you say "I love you" to me

no matter how angry you are.

I'm not talking to a boyfriend or a brother or a friend.

This poems for a speacial man,

I like to call him dad.

Answer 1

It is "you're", not "your".

"...I love the way YOU'RE there for me"

Answer 2

it is great, sweetie.

Answer 3

lie: awwww, i really liked it!

truth: the idea of the poem is good (writing a poem to dad), the execution was bland and eck..., sorry.

Answer 4

its sweet more than nice espicially for the dad

i really like it

hope you continuous to write on

great composition well done keep it up

Answer 5

Sweet and sensitive and would make a great father's day gift for your Dad !!! Good job, and well done!!! Cheers!!!