Another poem...Tell me what you think?

Question

Dream phase initiated

Earth slips out of focus,

Falling behind me

Dusty cosmos lie waiting

In a star strewn sky

Fantasy and reality intertwined

Zero gravity, zero worries

Defying time and space

Planets orbit around me

In this vast world

Waiting to be explored

Answer 1

best poem I've ever heard.

Answer 2

Super!

It's very good, you're very good

I love it! =)

Answer 3

wow. thats really good!

Answer 4

I like this poem..

Answer 5

It's pretty good, better than most of the c**p people post here.

Answer 6

pretty engaging. Gives a sense of movement.

Answer 7

It is great. It is also something I can relate to so that makes it better. :D

Answer 8

Nice and efficient. I like the word "falling" best.  But I'd say an overall good impression of dreaming.

Answer 9

i'm not a poem expert, but i think it's really good.