Another poem? Titled "Looking For You"?

Question

"Looking For You" Written September 20, 2005 by me.

I wander listlessly through

An empty corridor

Searching for you

Despite the ashes and horror

I wish to search the ground

Although there is a fear

Of all the people I have found

You are not there

Above and below

For you I search

Never letting go

Of my high on this perch

Losing my life long dream

I've dug my own grave

Hoping for a separate scheme

Though now I've got to be brave...

Opinions please?

Answer 1

Very nice an easy read! There is one line to me that doesn't make any sense in your poem  (Of my high on this perch) I just don't get this part of it!!

Overall you did a good job!!! Keep them coming!!! Cheers !!

Answer 2

i like it a lot =]

Answer 3

I really truly love it! Its amazing! Keep writing and definitely show people your poetry!