Another poem about my friend who passed away? (tell me what you think)?

Question

Through the good times and the bad

and all the laughs that we had

through the tear drops that fell

like rain crashing down

for every kiss and every word

for every time we almost drown

for every smile

for every frown

would you cry

if you looked down?

through all the fun times

through the storm and the rain

for all the bad times

that seemed to be the same

for every time

we almost forgot

for the future

tha we can't share

because before your death

you were the only one to care

Answer 1

Beautiful and heartbreaking.

I'm so sorry for your loss, sweetie.

Wonderful poem, almost made me cry.

Answer 2

Wow, this is really really good.

I seriously got chills!

Answer 3

I strongly strongly like this poem..

My favorite part is "Would you cry if you looked down?"

Great job!

I write poetry too and I dont have the guts to display it on here cause I think nobody will like it. But this is amazing !!

Casey*

Answer 4

I'm sorry for your loss.

This is a very beautiful poem, I think you're friend would be very proud of this

*hugs*

Answer 5

Wow, that is really good.

Amazing :)

Answer 6

Great job, you should really submit it to http://www.papertank.com and see what they think.

I bet you could get a high rating for it on there!

Answer 7

im sorry about your friend... =(

but that was amazing. your friend would be proud.