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Another poem. feedback please?

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-Boredom Kills-

Slowly winding down through the haze

Ignoring everything that I see

Waking up from the daze

That has consumed part of me

Nothing around holds any gleam

There is no hope here, no deliverance

Retreat to false realities, a new scene

Worlds with rules, but no obedience

Cyber people saying Cyber things

Things that would never be said elsewhere

Why? 'Cause then the songbird sings

Attracting those who really don't care

Only people that wish to blackmail

Machines built to destroy the will

Consuming all in their path of wails

Never hesitating for a kill

Random thoughts that go through

A mind as clouded by vanity

That as if by queue

Boredom slowly consumes sanity

-12/29/04

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  1. S h i tt y Sh i tt y Bo Bitty


  2. What can I say? Brilliant, just Brilliant! Thank you so much for posting, I'll add this to my "Favourite Poems" List!  

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