Another poem of mine?

Question

you just have to run through the pain

through all that strain

then you get your second breath

a second from death

then you get runners high

then you die

what do you think?

Answer 1

I LOVE the symbolism. It's a beautiful poem. I am a fellow runner. You may want to campitalize some parts and add a comma or two but other than that the poem is perfect!! :)

Answer 2

gets hopeful then he dies.

its cool like the rhyming