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Another poem of thought provoking material?

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You

Replenish me

Like a cool breeze

In a scorching summer

Giving me nourishment

Giving me laughter

Showing graceful

Mercy and love

That is given

Freely, yet

Lovingly

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make it sing in the wind....
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Not especially thought provoking material. What is the title?

You have a beautifully shaped poem; and the words are fresh, no cliche's -- YEAH!

I like it.

T.
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All I can say is refreshingly beautiful and yes I do like this much, really enjoy your artful ways with words! Cheers!
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mines better

ahem...

You

refuel me

like a car

at a gas station

pumping me gas

the premium kind

joy and harmony

you give to me

expensively

yet wilingly
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Nice. Well structured.
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