Another poem.?

Question

Honest opinions please!

Extra sweet, with a flower on the side,

Hundreds of colors, not just for the eye,

A picture, one hundred memories unwind,

Those wonderful notes, ringing in my ears,

A soft kiss, the last thing I know,

As I drift into a forever sleep.

(no I'm not suicidal it's just what came to mind, and it describes things around me)

<3

~an average girl

Answer 1

I like it! XD! The rhyming and meaning are the best part!

Answer 2

*applauds* it is a good poem! i like the fact that it is vivid and i can picture what you are writing about! the meaning as Kay said is wonderful! keep writing!