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Another poem!?

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scraped glass and zig-zag shapes

draw an outlined sunset

hungry birds hide in the corners

ringing their beaks at bikini girls

eating with their mouths open

spilling mold

there's a green scent in the air

like rotten seaweed

but when the angry fowls l**k the tip of the ice cream cloud

the sky will go blank

and the girls will be gone

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  1. I don't like the bikini part...


  2. is good :) its definetly different and i think thats pretty cool n.n

    kudos!!

  3. Meeh.

    It Didn't Flow.

    Though The Overall Poem.

    Was Rather.

    Splendid.
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