Another poem..read it please?

Question

Young like a child,

Old like the earth,

Weak like the lonsome,

Strong like lifes worth,

Loud like sweet laughter,

Quiet like the sea,

Happy like the sun light,

Sad like the willow tree,

Dark like the black cat,

Light like the summer sky,

Who I am is who I'll be,

As year after year goes by.

Answer 1

Well, it's not really my "style" or poem, but I like it. So, yeah, it's pretty good. Keep writing!

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Answer 2

It's okay, but it lacks in meaning, you get no meaning out of any of it except the last 2 lines. Very cliche, but a good start, keep writing.

Answer 3

Its OK but I think theres too many cliches like " Dark like the black cat", thats one of the ones you need to change. I would give it a 6 out of 10. I have seen heaps of poems like this.

Good luck

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Answer 4

I love it !!!!!!!!!..