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This is another poem/song that I have written, I guess the poem/song says everything it needs to say. Please can I have your opinion on what you think of it and how it can be improved? Also does it relay to you as a reader what I feel?Thank you in advance for all your answers.Everything Reminds Me of YouI wake up in the morningAnd the morning sun reminds me Reminds me of your smileThe warmth of the sun reminds meReminds me of your loveEverything reminds me of youEverything tells me that I need youThe birds and the beesAnd the stars in the night skyAll tell me that I love youAs the birds start to singI am reminded of your sweet voiceAs the scent of the flowers waft in the airI remember your sweet aromaI remember how much I love youEverything reminds me of youEverything tells me that I need youThe birds and the beesAnd the stars in the night skyAll tell me that I love youAs the day goes byEverything tells me that I need youI hear your name being sung by the birdsI hear your name being hummed by the beesAnd I am reminded how much I love youEverything reminds me of youEverything tells me that I need youThe birds and the beesAnd the stars in the night skyAll tell me that I love youAs the sun beings to setI am reminded of your beautiful faceI look up at the night skyAnd the stars remind me of your sparkling eyesAnd I know I love you so muchEverything reminds me of youEverything tells me that I need youThe birds and the beesAnd the stars in the night skyAll tell me that I love you29/07/08Written by Broken Heart ©Copyright 2008
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