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Another poem to think on? Real Talk?

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Real Talk

Written by Semper Fi Reborn

Let down your walls

Get to know God

There's footprints in the sand

Seeds in sod

Grow with Him

Become a tree and bear fruit

Flow with Him

And watch tree grow strong roots

This is real talk

Real talk, yeah, I said it twice

Let your words be the clearest

And your motives be precise

I don't mince words

My God didn't make me to chop

He gave me a voice

Said talk real and don't stop

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  1. A-ooh'-rah.. nice bit of writing. It was sanctifying.  


  2. YOU are real, and so is your poetry.

  3. Your poem says it truly as I've heard and seen it. My God is plain spoken. He has always dealt with me in straightforward fashion and seems to expect the same from me. I favor being clear and true!

  4. A sermon would do well with this as the lead.  Said well and obviously from the heart.  Compliments.

  5. I like the feeling of the first two stanzas. I stumbled a bit in the third stanza. Nice though.

  6. Flow with Him

    And watch tree grow strong roots

    Beautiful.

  7. I like it, there`s a beautiful message here. As a matter fact 2 messages here. If only people could see what we see.

    #1)Know God

    #2)Be yourself

    Don't stop preaching the message, ever.  

  8. straight of the cuff, no bullshit, I like it a lot.

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