Another quick poem to fill in the gap between boredom and boredom?

Question

my eyes bloomed in the glistening light

alone beneath the pale starlight

looking at the luminous sky i adore

it always seemed like there were more

a previous life

a recent world

taken away by the fallen angel

constructed by the gods

sent to banish never-ending Edens

here i gaze in the distance

keeping track at the fhgfdsaaaa

regretting dsdgaffa

s dbze bze bze

now i stand beneath the starlight

& hope to finish it tonight

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sorry i know this poem is bad. its because i was playing unfitting music so it kinda destroys the poem-ish mood

try and write a deep sadistic poem about war while hearing thats not my name by the ting tings

oh yea and the fallen angel is a bomb

Answer 1

i likee it!! matter fact i love it! the poem isnt bad at all! i love the poem mood and everything! A+ for youuu