Another story idea that just was formed! what do yah think ?

Question

A girl and her two friends just graduated highschool . They buy and apartment together because they are all gogint o the same college . Right before college starts theres this big party . The party is completly crazy . Halfway through the pary The main character notices that she hasnt seen one of her roomates anywhere . She finds the one that shes seen and they look for her . When the pary ends their friend is still nowhere to be seen. They end up reporting her as missing . Weeks go buy and the main character is having trouble accepting her friend is missing . towards the middle of the story her friend returns shocking everyone . The friend has no memory of where she was according to watch she says but somethings different about her . The way she moves . The way she looks .Her lack of appetite. the main character is eager to discover what truly happened to her and what her friend has become.

it seems interesting to me . Id like to know your opinions

Answer 1

what about adding vampires? the girl gets caught by a vampire but cannot be affected by the sunlight because she does not know. u can add a history to her friend's likevampires want to get her for some reason and they make her friend a vampire and makes her forget about it. then the girls kill the vampires with the help of the vampire friend and kill them all. u can end the story in ur way.

Answer 2

it sounds really good, i would read it!

the only thing is what she becomes, it kind of sounds like the vampires is the twilight saga

Answer 3

omg an anerexic brain washed her !?! jk

Answer 4

Oh is she a vampire? Aside from the fact that lots of people are writing about vampires (if that's what it really is) it sounds really good. I like the mysterious aspect of it with the disappearance and how she claims to not remember anything. I would definitely read it!

Answer 5

what happens to her? does she turn into a vampire or something?  

seems good, but it would drag on if the girl was missing for most of the story. maybe if you switched the point of view:

at the party- while she's missing: main character

when the girl is missing- return: missing girl

just before return- discovering-end: main character

hope this helps!