Another two minuter- Yes or No?

Question

I wrote this just now. Unplanned. It just came out. Yes or No?

Quick step

Left right

Hands by side

Arms tight

Right arm up

Left arm down

Hold gun still

Make no sounds

Straighten hat

Do not fall

Blond hair blue eyes

Standing tall

Salute your lord

Drop your gaze

His piercing eyes

Yet do not raise

One two

In your line

Hurry up

We don’t have time

Steady now

Hold your gun

Gallop forward

Control your run

Aim for the heart

Aim for the head

Fire certain

Be sure they’re dead

Recite your anthem

Sing your praise

Salute your lord

Drop your gaze.

Answer 1

It would be completely boring except for the homoerotic elements making it humorous.

Answer 2

very up-beat and true.... i love it.

Answer 3

kind of dark, i like it