Another work in progress "The Rind" opinions please?

Question

I promise I will leave you alone for while after this...

"The Rind"

I saw in you

A sensational hue

A sweet explosion

Shadows skipping

So well rounded

Your dotted pattern

Ripe with content

I soon admired

Your thick skin-

Or so it seemed

Yet as you peeled

The outer layer

The truth revealed

Your bitter rind

The dancing strings

It was just a tease

Your excessive pulp

To much for me

-to stomach

I prefer you concentrated

Answer 1

Orange tree in my back yard, just little green golf balls now...but wait till Christmas!

Answer 2

Out of the 3 poems I read of yours this one is my favorite, since I can relate to it.

I love the humor at the end. Great job!

This one gets a triple A++!

You really earn the title POET.

Answer 3

WE do not wish to be left alone...or WE would not be here DL...

Very "pithy" I tried to squeeze it for all it's worth...And it was a plenty.

P.S. I reposted "Is it against the rules" Hope you like it....

Answer 4

LOL That was great, very humorous ending, you have much talent and now seem versatile to boot!  Thanks for sharing that one! Enjoy it!! Cheers!! Reminds me of the time went to see the male strippers!!

Love the title it couldn't be more perfect  for your poem!!