Any comments on my new 'secret love' poem?

Question

Holding

Sometimes I wonder

if you haven’t a clue,

that beyond being friends

I’m also in love with you.

I pray for a day

when the light will dawn;

and become a reality,

that there is more

than a friendship

between you and me.

But until then I must

keep a lock on my heart,

be your best friend

and hide this other part,

because

I love you enough

to continue to dream;

and hold on tight;

there will come a day

you will see me,

in a different light.

Answer 1

oh...oh, gods, you do not know how hard that hit me

it was...somewhat appropriate for the very moment i looked at it. though knocked me a little deeper into melancholy, but i can cope.

its beautiful, in its way. i hope for your sake that that day comes.

Answer 2

This is a cute poem

it talks about friendship

and or love.

I say these two because

Two people start out as friends

then as it grows that could be love.

Although the person may be playing hard to get

I am referring to the first 3 lines in your poem.

I also see that the love has gone beyond friendship

I will say this poem is of secret love

also.  

You are in love with that person

and he doesn't realize this.

Answer 3

very nice...it sounds great, maybe try to add some metaphoric representation of what you're feeling...it usually seems more powerful that way. but nice job this really is great

Answer 4

Suggestion: check the last 3 lines - seems the meter is a little off ♥

Answer 5

Story of my life sorta I can really relate and really enjoyed reading it very much