Any comments on this poem?

Question

Fresh Air

The sound of dancing windchimes

tells me there’s good sleeping in store;

delta breezes float

through windows and doors

as they will my dreams tonight.

Coolness is moving through the valley

pushing out all the heavy clouds

of yesterday’s disasters;

the breath of God,

come to restore stars in the night sky

and hang the moon back in place.

Answer 1

That felt very serene and put me in a weird state of calmness and almost sleepiness... just an example of how great poetry can incurr direct changes in the reader...