Any one got any suggestions for my yugioh deck?

Question

Heres what its like right now its good but it could be way better

MONSTERS

dark blade

needle worm

little winggaurd

wall of illusion

marie the fallen one

darkfire soldier #1

penguin soilder

celtic gaurdian

spear dragon

gemini elf

gear golem the moving fortress

time wizard

dark magician

zure knight of dark world

sea serpent worrior of darkness

airknight parshath

grave squirmer

gearfried the iron knight

dark sage

gia the dragon chapion

curse of dragon

gia the fierce knight

oni tank t34

snipe hunter

luster dragon

ninja grandmaster sasuke

spear cretin

des kangaroo

MAGIC

diffrent dimension capsule

monster reborn

book of secret arts

future fusion

gravekeepers servant

graceful charity

foolish burial

shield crush

spell absorption

dark magic curtain

ectoplasmer

2x mystical space typhoon

TRAPS

magic drain

straight flush

magic cylinder

curse of royal

sakuretsu armor

needle wall

coffin seller

seven tools of the bandit

ring of destruction

Answer 1

Well, to start off you want to have a general theme to the deck and seeing cards like dark magic curtain, book of secret arts, dark magician, and dark sage, you might want to focus on a spellcaster deck. Other cards to help this would be dark skilled magician, old vindictive magician, dark magician of chaos, magician's circle, magician's selection, magician's valkyria, magical dimension, and thousand knives. Also, you might want to limit the monsters around to 20 and i think you're only allowed to have one mystical space typhoon and graceful charity is banned unless i'm mistaken.

Answer 2

all i can think of its torrential tribute, mirror force, spellbinding circle/nightmare wheel. Get a lot more 1900 monsters and replace weaker ones, as a good defense get a battle footballer, get a spirit reaper, vampire lord, and sinister serpent those will really help

Answer 3

to prev answerer, you are right its banned

Ok here is what i see in the pile of cards(cant be considered a real deck sry):

-too many cards

-cards seem have almost nthing in common

-magic and trap are fine, but

take out curse of royal, ring od destruction, needle wall,straight flush, dimension capsulems, spell absorbtion and extoplasmer.

-monsters seems to be broght frm starter decks....in other words, useless monsters.

Things to do:

-think of a theme for the deck: dark deck, light deck etc.

-get the booster(structure deck if you are really a beginner)

dark deck get phantom darkness, light deck get light of destruction, monarchs get the monarch structure deck ect...

-read up on deck strategies that suits the deck type and add in support cards

-for an easier time, go http://forum.tcgplayer.com/forumdisplay.... for referencing

-get money for individual cards

-dont give up